I am from by KatiePittman
Nice rhyming, did it come naturally or did you have to work at it?
THE RHYMING IS AGREED NICE, I JUST WISH THAT THE PITURE WOULD HAVE BEEN MORE CLEAR. AND I ALSO LIKE THE SIZE OF THE POEM SHORT AND TOO THE POINT
I love the rhyming as well. The picture seems a little distorted, and it was hard to read at points.. Great job though!
I really liked your poem. It showed a lot about what you went through, and what you grew up with!
Sounds like you were in CA. Possibly Hollywood :) Great poem!
Your absolutely gorgeous and the poem illustrates it perfectly. ;]
Thanks so much, that's so nice.
Sounds like you are from a place with much better weather than here.Great poem.
Nice rhyming, did it come naturally or did you have to work at it?
ReplyDeleteTHE RHYMING IS AGREED NICE, I JUST WISH THAT THE PITURE WOULD HAVE BEEN MORE CLEAR. AND I ALSO LIKE THE SIZE OF THE POEM SHORT AND TOO THE POINT
ReplyDeleteI love the rhyming as well. The picture seems a little distorted, and it was hard to read at points.. Great job though!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem. It showed a lot about what you went through, and what you grew up with!
ReplyDeleteSounds like you were in CA. Possibly Hollywood :) Great poem!
ReplyDeleteYour absolutely gorgeous and the poem illustrates it perfectly. ;]
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, that's so nice.
DeleteSounds like you are from a place with much better weather than here.Great poem.
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