I like the overall poem. I would have loved it if you would have kept the I am from idea at the beginning of all of them; however still great way to describe yourself
I really enjoyed reading your poem! A lot of it reminded me of myself. I'm also from a little town that everyone knew everything, and basketball games were the big thing!
Great Poem. Tells alot about yourself. The little town you are from sounds alot like the one I live in now.
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem, and I like the picture.
ReplyDeleteMy dad, my brother, and I all play percussion too. :)
I don't play drums, but I love to sing too. Sometimes music just makes the difference. :)I like the poem by the way!
ReplyDeleteI like the overall poem. I would have loved it if you would have kept the I am from idea at the beginning of all of them; however still great way to describe yourself
ReplyDeleteAfter reading this again, I totally agree!
DeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem! A lot of it reminded me of myself. I'm also from a little town that everyone knew everything, and basketball games were the big thing!
ReplyDeleteFantastic poem Tori,you have a beautiful way with words. Living in a small town is every bit the same as a large family :]
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I wish I would have grown up in a small town to have those memories!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem! I learned a lot about you!
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ReplyDeleteYour poem allowed me to reflect on my past how life was in a small town.
Great poem, drums are awsome
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