I like the poem. I would have liked to know more about where/what you are "from".. This is more of a "what I am" poem. The font could have been a little bigger as well, I think mine would have benifited from bigger font as well. Overall this is great! :)
I really like your poem. I like the fact that you seem to know who you are as a person. May I ask why you chose the photo that you did for the background of your poem?
A rare cloud, meaning I am a rare person as well. My peers are not quite the same as me in my thought process and on how I conduct myself. That was my thought process as I decided that specific picture.
As to all my commenters...If I may, I thank you for all for the good job replies. The reason why though this is the way it is, is strickly due to the fact that in our section 104 class, he stated that all we need is a poem about us. I am sketchy about any person information items, that is why you will not see where I am from, nor specific personal items. Also I decided to write an "I am" poem not his original "I am from" poem. Thank you all though again for your comments. Hopefully my reply can clarify some information. Thanks
Wow!Is all I can say. Sounds like you have a good head on your shoulders.
ReplyDeleteThis is a pretty amazing poem! Sounds like you already know who you are. :)
ReplyDeleteI like the poem. I would have liked to know more about where/what you are "from".. This is more of a "what I am" poem. The font could have been a little bigger as well, I think mine would have benifited from bigger font as well. Overall this is great! :)
ReplyDeleteWow, you sure have a lot of self confidence!! Keep it up in life.
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem. I like the fact that you seem to know who you are as a person. May I ask why you chose the photo that you did for the background of your poem?
ReplyDeleteA rare cloud, meaning I am a rare person as well. My peers are not quite the same as me in my thought process and on how I conduct myself. That was my thought process as I decided that specific picture.
DeleteIt didn't really say were you are from. It sounds like your an interesting person though.
ReplyDeleteAs to all my commenters...If I may, I thank you for all for the good job replies. The reason why though this is the way it is, is strickly due to the fact that in our section 104 class, he stated that all we need is a poem about us. I am sketchy about any person information items, that is why you will not see where I am from, nor specific personal items. Also I decided to write an "I am" poem not his original "I am from" poem. Thank you all though again for your comments. Hopefully my reply can clarify some information. Thanks
ReplyDeleteYou are a very original person!
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